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We were the only ones who saw it when it happened.
We knew not what we saw, but we sought to understand it for it had captivated us so.

We walked a path unknown, but as if we knew where to go, in search of the answer to this mystique.
We created beautiful images, beautiful words, beautiful sounds, and beautiful dreams not unlike the ones we saw.
And it was beautiful, everything was beautiful, compelling us to walk further.

On this frontier we joined our hands in brotherhood, dedicating ourselves to eternal friendship.
As we walked those who dared to hate did not exist and those who dared to exist did not hate.

But we were the only ones there when it happened,
and so we alone can walk this path. For now...
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WiNGz69 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Student Writer
"Those who dared to hate did not exist
Those who dared to exist did not hate"

This is beautiful, I love it. Very beautifully written - Well done.
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DoctorNarpasLoveless Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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WiNGz69 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Student Writer
Your welcome, I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems (:
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xlntwtch Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012   Writer
Mysterioius yet fun to read. This is now Featured in the club below. Look for it in Features or in Favorites. Once you hit the club icon, see "Some Best of Daily Members Submissions...See more here." 'Here' is a link to use if you need to.

:icongetwatchers: ... :thumbsup:
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DoctorNarpasLoveless Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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xlntwtch Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012   Writer
(Watch out for that one place where the verb tense changes from past to present [suddenly].)

You're very welcome. :D
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